Commotion within

Commotion, commotion, commotion  

Echoing in every cell  

Like vexatious insects crawling, unrelenting  

No permission sought  

They dominate, claiming their way  

From mind's inception, they seize all of me  

Their home found within  

This commotion never fades  

Slow simmer, sudden wildfire burst  

What do they bring, but ashes and lashes

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  1. SDJune 22, 2024 at 4:03 AM

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  2. SDJune 22, 2024 at 4:05 AM

    Nice thought provoking poem seems to evoke a sense of chaos and turmoil within oneself, possibly reflecting inner struggles or external disturbances. A reflection on the negative outcomes and the relentlessness of this internal struggle.

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